Tuesday, 21 September 2021

Goldilocks is guilty!

 

Today I was learning to to do persuasive and make someone agree with my opinion

I enjoyed doing these kinda things

I found it challenging to do the story without watching the video

My digital learning object shows why she is guilty

Next time I would change my third reason with more writing

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora
    My name is ignatius and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I i like that you use self asmint
    you should highlight your work
    you did a lot of writing
    nice job

    Please visit my blog here

    From ignatius

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  2. kia ora Aaron
    my name is halamehi from Saint Mary's school.
    I really like how you highlighted work to show us that you achieved your success criteria.
    maybe you could try adding words that help describe objects like looks like
    sounds like and so on.
    I also Thought Goldie locks was also guilty From halamehi.

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  3. Hello Aaron
    Have you tried to high light your work
    I was thing the same thing that goldilocks is guilty
    I really like that gave a lot of detail
    From Devansh

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