Monday, 2 August 2021

My holiday writing

 

Today I was learning hot use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialog and to describe what we saw and how we felt

I enjoyed making this cause it makes me remember the good times with my friend and to get better at using hook sentences and paragraphs

I found it challenging to do a lot of writing and making sure it makes sense and use paragraphs

My digital learning object shows what me and Aibel did in the sleepover



Next time I would change the font to an fancyer one

2 comments:

  1. you put a 9 in the front the sentes

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  2. hi Aaron this is Boston I liked the Doc you did and I liked all the writing you did to from Boston.

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